ext_115480 ([identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-11-14 06:51 pm
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Senryu

on uncle frank's arms
bruises where death tapped him,
asking for the time

-- Ray McNiece
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[identity profile] pyralid.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
That's really just wonderful.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I have two others up on my livejournal. Maybe I should post them, too? This one's my favorite of the three, though.

[identity profile] pyralid.livejournal.com 2005-11-16 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! I would like to see those...

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-18 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm... Okay.
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