ext_115480 ([identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-11-14 06:51 pm
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Senryu

on uncle frank's arms
bruises where death tapped him,
asking for the time

-- Ray McNiece
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[identity profile] kvschwartz.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
very pretty.

I think you mean "senryu."

[identity profile] anithradia.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, I noticed that too.

Pronto chango, Gillian.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, Lisa, okay... *sigh*

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
...Oy. You're right, I do.

*changes as quietly as possible*
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