ext_14334 ([identity profile] hlglne.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2006-10-28 02:31 am (UTC)

The barrel is original. The light laughter and truth is conflation with 'barrel of fun,' possibly. It can be hard to render a theological term for one of God's aspects into just one English word, but I think the laughter is a bit extra indeed.

It actually is a pretty accurate translation. What parts did you find too modern?

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