ext_28644 ([identity profile] wicked-sassy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2007-03-09 08:47 am
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a request, and "Appeal to the Grammarians" by Paul Violi

Good morning. I have a request and a poem for you all.

The request:

what's your favorite love poem? I'm looking for verse that isn't classic (so, not something like "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways...").

The poem [via Poetry Daily]:

Appeal to the Grammarians by Paul Violi

We, the naturally hopeful,
Need a simple sign
For the myriad ways we're capsized.
We who love precise language
Need a finer way to convey
Disappointment and perplexity.
For speechlessness and all its inflections,
For up-ended expectations,
For every time we're ambushed
By trivial or stupefying irony,
For pure incredulity, we need
The inverted exclamation point.
For the dropped smile, the limp handshake,
For whoever has just unwrapped a dumb gift
Or taken the first sip of a flat beer,
Or felt love or pond ice
Give way underfoot, we deserve it.
We need it for the air pocket, the scratch shot,
The child whose ball doesn't bounce back,
The flat tire at journey's outset,
The odyssey that ends up in Weehawken.
But mainly because I need it—here and now
As I sit outside the Caffe Reggio
Staring at my espresso and cannoli
After this middle-aged couple
Came strolling by and he suddenly
Veered and sneezed all over my table
And she said to him, "See, that's why
I don't like to eat outside."

[identity profile] artofthebawdy.livejournal.com 2007-03-09 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
My favorite is the invitation by mountain oraih

The Invitation

It doesn’t interest me what you do for a living.
I want to know what you ache for
and if you dare to dream of meeting your heart’s longing.

It doesn’t interest me how old you are.
I want to know if you will risk looking like a fool
for love
for your dream
for the adventure of being alive.

It doesn’t interest me what planets are squaring your moon...
I want to know if you have touched the centre of your own sorrow
if you have been opened by life’s betrayals
or have become shrivelled and closed
from fear of further pain.

I want to know if you can sit with pain
mine or your own
without moving to hide it
or fade it
or fix it.

I want to know if you can be with joy
mine or your own
if you can dance with wildness
and let the ecstasy fill you to the tips of your fingers and toes
without cautioning us
to be careful
to be realistic
to remember the limitations of being human.

It doesn’t interest me if the story you are telling me
is true.
I want to know if you can
disappoint another
to be true to yourself.
If you can bear the accusation of betrayal
and not betray your own soul.
If you can be faithless
and therefore trustworthy.

I want to know if you can see Beauty
even when it is not pretty
every day.
And if you can source your own life
from its presence.

I want to know if you can live with failure
yours and mine
and still stand at the edge of the lake
and shout to the silver of the full moon,
“Yes.”

It doesn’t interest me
to know where you live or how much money you have.
I want to know if you can get up
after the night of grief and despair
weary and bruised to the bone
and do what needs to be done
to feed the children.

It doesn’t interest me who you know
or how you came to be here.
I want to know if you will stand
in the centre of the fire
with me
and not shrink back.

It doesn’t interest me where or what or with whom
you have studied.
I want to know what sustains you
from the inside
when all else falls away.

I want to know if you can be alone
with yourself
and if you truly like the company you keep
in the empty moments.


[identity profile] girl-in-blue.livejournal.com 2007-03-09 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, he doesn't ask for much does he? haha, just kidding - this is lovely.

[identity profile] peccare.livejournal.com 2007-03-10 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
:O i have a new favourite

[identity profile] ladyjeanetta.livejournal.com 2007-03-10 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
I've always loved this one - like the ultimate personal ad :D

Beautiful!

[identity profile] acreofbones.livejournal.com 2007-03-10 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)


One of my favourite poems of all time. *le swoon*

[identity profile] bloodrebel333.livejournal.com 2007-04-01 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
I love this.