https://sliverofsanity.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sliverofsanity.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-03-17 09:27 pm (UTC)

I read these twice--the second time with the title "Suicide" in mind. It almost seems as if the first woman was justified or graceful in her purposeful death, while the second was just sick of life or not suited for it because she lost all vitality--"beer gone flat" as opposed to "a twilight rune."

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