ext_142492 ([identity profile] haitianheromg.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-06-16 10:49 am (UTC)

I like the general theme. Not a fan of the chorus neither. But there were some interesting stanzas. Definitely didn't sell the poem to me all the way through, unfortunatley.
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