ext_345758 ([identity profile] claymedeiros.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-06-27 01:34 am (UTC)

Lovely words and rhythm with over riding sensuality and the dissonance of the images. I remember "our bodies, possessed by light." Like the poem, there is joy and longing in the memory.

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