http://unearthingbone.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] unearthingbone.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-07-07 05:10 pm (UTC)

The ending, and really the whole poem, is so creepy. I dig it. Without that desperate undertone, it would be trite, so I like that it's not just another longing/loss poem.
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