https://sliverofsanity.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sliverofsanity.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-08-06 02:16 am (UTC)

very nice. I like the line breaks "Death has/a lot of time. Death can/..."
The end is almost trite, but isn't.
I'm keeping this one. Thanks!
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