http://aria-muse.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aria-muse.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-08-08 03:22 am (UTC)

I just think it's such a wonderful atmospheric piece and it's sort of clunky at the end. The sudden twist doesn't seem artful to me; it just sort of makes a point awkwardly.
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