ext_22396 ([identity profile] synecdoche.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2007-08-08 03:25 am (UTC)

I can see what you mean -- the last lines could definitely come off as sort of trite.

Thanks for explaining. :)
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