http://babbss.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] babbss.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2008-02-08 12:31 am
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Everything, Srikanth Reddy

She was watching the solar eclipse
through a piece of broken bottle

when he left home.
He found a blue kite in the forest

on the day she lay down
with a sailor. When his name changed,

she stitched a cloud to a quilt
made of rags. They did not meet,

so they never could be parted.
So she finished her prayer,

& he folded his map of the sea.

[identity profile] aimlesswanderer.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect.

./w

[identity profile] no-facades.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
i love this