http://m-m-m-mother.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] m-m-m-mother.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2008-06-07 09:00 am
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ee cummings, "the boys i mean are not refined"

the boys i mean are not refined
they go with girls who buck and bite
they do not give a fuck for luck
they hump them thirteen times a night

one hangs a hat upon her tit
one carves a cross on her behind
they do not give a shit for wit
the boys i mean are not refined

they come with girls who bite and buck
who cannot read and cannot write
who laugh like they would fall apart
and masturbate with dynamite

the boys i mean are not refined
they cannot chat of that and this
they do not give a fart for art
they kill like you would take a piss

they speak whatever's on their mind
they do whatever's in their pants
the boys i mean are not refined
they shake the mountains when they dance

[identity profile] rhapsodica.livejournal.com 2008-06-07 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. I never realized that "The Boys Are Too Refined" by The Hush Sound was referencing an e.e. cummings poem! Very interesting.

[identity profile] skyfalling.livejournal.com 2008-06-07 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
That was my exact same thought.

[identity profile] rely-on-romance.livejournal.com 2008-06-07 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
who laugh like they would fall apart
and masturbate with dynamite


what a great line!
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[identity profile] vito-excalibur.livejournal.com 2008-06-07 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I know reposting is allowed, but... this is like the 3rd or 4th time for this poem. Basically if it's E.E. Cummings, it's been posted before (http://community.livejournal.com/greatpoets/tag/e.e.+cummings).

[identity profile] devilyouwere.livejournal.com 2008-06-07 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
e.e. cummings = ♥.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
Hm. You probably should have at least checked tags. Sorry. cummings is a poet that shows up quite a lot.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Why hasn't this poem been adapted into more songs? It's like classic punk.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not attacking you and I'm not attacking the fact you posted him.

I was talking to an assistant publisher of a small, independent publication a few days ago. I was looking for an internship.

I asked what kind of poetry they published alongside their books. She said, "We don't publish poetry. It doesn't sell."

Most people are more than hesitant to read or buy books of poetry published in the last five years. They are more likely to buy it if they're familiar with the work and have seen it elsewhere, like in school or in, well, a cool LJ community.

ee cummings is great. A lot of people adore him. I like him a lot, too. I think that this community could benefit from more posts of lesser known great poets, though.

[identity profile] adesina.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I've been around this community for a while, and I don't recall ever seeing this cummings poem. I love it, and I'm glad the original poster posted it.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude. I said the post was fine. I just think there's a lot of cummings' poetry here. Classic and popular poets are awesome, but I've seen a lot of him.