https://sliverofsanity.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sliverofsanity.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2008-09-11 04:21 am (UTC)

I like it until the last line. Orangutang? Orangutan? Take that part out, and it's such a bittersweet poem.
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