ext_290921 ([identity profile] mspixieears.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2009-06-06 12:24 am (UTC)

Woah, awfully cliched similes. The first one is forgivable but the second one is just terrible. This just doesn't strike me as a successful poem.
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