http://gh0stmeat.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gh0stmeat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2009-09-25 02:33 pm (UTC)

thinking about that last line -

i like it because it's organic:

talking about beauty/distance, & then stating his distance from death at a blissful moment in his life, life being lovelier when considered in that light.

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