ext_24354 ([identity profile] inflightdata.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2010-01-02 02:45 am

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A somewhat odd request, but: if anybody happens to have poems on the subject of city nightlife, I'd love them for a radio show I'm doing.

In return, something completely irrelevant:

'Words, Wide Night', Carol Ann Duffy
Somewhere on the other side of this wide night
and the distance between us, I am thinking of you.
The room is turning slowly away from the moon.

This is pleasurable. Or shall I cross that out and say
it is sad? In one of the tenses I singing
an impossible song of desire that you cannot hear.

La lala la. See? I close my eyes and imagine the dark hills I would have to cross
to reach you. For I am in love with you

and this is what it is like or what it is like in words.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/everette1_/ 2010-01-01 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
la lala la love this.

[identity profile] teithiwr.livejournal.com 2010-01-01 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! I'd been meaning to post this poem, but never got round to it. Great that you did. It's a lovely one.

[identity profile] maiden-heart.livejournal.com 2010-01-01 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
love it :)

[identity profile] peppermintwords.livejournal.com 2010-01-03 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
In one of the tenses I singing
an impossible song of desire that you cannot hear

is there a typo here?

[identity profile] shibby-kiki.livejournal.com 2010-01-13 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I wondered that too and found an interesting analysis of that awkward bit here:http://puisipoesy.blogspot.com/2007/05/words-wide-night.html