ext_94637 ([identity profile] veronica-milvus.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry 2011-12-17 01:11 pm (UTC)

If I took this to a poetry workshop they would tell me to trim it to about 20 lines and do more "show" and less "tell"!
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