ext_349003 ([identity profile] shechoselove.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2013-02-07 10:49 pm
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One Poem and One Request

Beautiful by Richard Brautigan

I go to bed in Los Angeles thinking
about you.

Pissing a few moments ago
I looked down at my penis
affectionately.

Knowing it has been inside
you twice today makes me
feel beautiful.

3 A.M.
January 15, 1967


Also, does anyone have any poems that mention/allude to being apprehensive about opening up to another person or opening up to someone/making oneself vulnerable in general?

Thank you for any help. <3

[identity profile] drabheathen.livejournal.com 2013-02-09 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
Utensil by A.R. Ammons

How does the pot pray:
wash me, so I gleam?

prays, crack my enamel:
let the rust in.

*** also***

Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering
There is a crack in everything
That's how the light gets in.

- Leonard Cohen
Edited 2013-02-09 02:09 (UTC)