ext_14236 ([identity profile] glass-doll.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-08-28 01:46 am
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im sooooo drained

Keeping Things Whole
by Mark Strand

In a field
I am the absence
of field.

This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.

When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body's been.

We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.

[identity profile] talullahred.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
This is one of two poems I think about on an almost daily basis. I think someone had already posted it, but it's always good to read again. Thanks.

[identity profile] neonandchrome.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Just out of curiosity, what is the other one?

[identity profile] talullahred.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Wild Geese by Mary Oliver. You can find it here: http://www.livejournal.com/community/greatpoets/1113265.html#cutid1

[identity profile] shaluvk.livejournal.com 2005-08-29 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
i'd never read mary oliver before. wild geese- just what i need- to wrench me out of my despair and show me my place in the family of things. amen.

[identity profile] shaluvk.livejournal.com 2005-08-29 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
thank you talullahred.

** adds to memories**

[identity profile] talullahred.livejournal.com 2005-08-29 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
My pleasure. That poem has done lots for me. I hope it soothes you too.

Tal

[identity profile] upendedurn.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this one.

[identity profile] vermillion-sky.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
this is so well-said... and so sad!
i knew i liked mark strand's work, but i had never seen this one before-- thanks for posting it! :)

[identity profile] skygypsy.livejournal.com 2005-08-28 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
wow this is fantastic
i loved the other strand poem posted recently, i'm going to have to look into his work, thanks!

[identity profile] cor3d.livejournal.com 2005-08-31 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
one of my eternal favorites. thank you for the post :)