I also think it is complete shit. It's like listening to someone going "oooh, look look I LIKE SEX hahaha oooh I bet you think I'm so shocking I think I'll say SEX SEX SEX some more because it's funny and shocking but oh not really I'm just laughing at your reaction to my silly pseudo-provocative borderline ass....SEXSEXSEX". Sigh. But I'm bitter. But I also don't think this is very good. It's typical and thinks it's witty, it's boring and thinks itself invigorating, and there are few things more irritating in any form of literature.

I'm not trying to be nasty or anything, just attempting to express why I find this poem irritating. Sometimes people find things irritating and it's hard to put a finger on why. That's the best explanation I can offer.