Senryu

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

on uncle frank's arms
bruises where death tapped him,
asking for the time

-- Ray McNiece

Comments

[nerak-g.livejournal.com]

LOVE Ray McNiece.

[pyralid.livejournal.com]

That's really just wonderful.

[epiclevelregina.livejournal.com]

...


WOW.

[yarn-and-twine.livejournal.com]

Pretty....

[kvschwartz.livejournal.com]

very pretty.

I think you mean "senryu."

[writtenbyhand.livejournal.com]

Amazing.

[anithradia.livejournal.com]

Heh, I noticed that too.

Pronto chango, Gillian.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

Okay, Lisa, okay... *sigh*

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

I picked a book of his off the library shelf, flipped through, and took it home. I'd love to see him perform some of his work.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

I have two others up on my livejournal. Maybe I should post them, too? This one's my favorite of the three, though.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

MMmm-HM.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

...Oy. You're right, I do.

*changes as quietly as possible*

He still tours

[nerak-g.livejournal.com]

pretty extensively. Really down to earth, approachable guy.

Really?

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

He seemed like it, for some reason. Where did you see him?

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

Wet Sand, Raven Tracks (http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0974205494/qid=1132101929/sr=1-7/ref=sr_1_7/104-0134620-8490317?v=glance&s=books) is the book it's from. There's some really good pieces in it.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

It's real ominous but sort of personal, too.

[pyralid.livejournal.com]

Oh! I would like to see those...

[writtenbyhand.livejournal.com]

I know. It manages to be creepy, sad, witty and damn wonderful in just three lines. Wow.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

Hmm... Okay.

[persephone-blue.livejournal.com]

Which is why I say, hurrah for haiku! Err, senryu.