ext_115480 ([identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-11-14 06:51 pm
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Senryu

on uncle frank's arms
bruises where death tapped him,
asking for the time

-- Ray McNiece
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[identity profile] nerak-g.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 03:37 am (UTC)(link)
LOVE Ray McNiece.

[identity profile] pyralid.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
That's really just wonderful.

[identity profile] kvschwartz.livejournal.com 2005-11-15 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
very pretty.

I think you mean "senryu."
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