http://agata.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] agata.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-11-29 10:15 pm
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I've Never Had it Done So Gently Before Richard Brautigan

The sweet juices of your mouth
are like castles bathed in honey.
I've never had it done so gently before.
You have put a circle of castles
around my penis and you swirl them
like sunlight on the wings of birds.
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[identity profile] dendraphile.livejournal.com 2005-11-30 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
God, I love Richard Brautigan...

Ah...

[identity profile] upendedurn.livejournal.com 2005-11-30 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
An old favorite.

[identity profile] gasping.livejournal.com 2005-11-30 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
That is completely arousing.
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[identity profile] lizblackdog.livejournal.com 2005-11-30 10:47 am (UTC)(link)
That's lovely. :-)

[identity profile] fiercerose.livejournal.com 2005-11-30 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot.

[identity profile] empressofstars.livejournal.com 2005-12-01 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
that is effing hott.

[identity profile] glass-doll.livejournal.com 2005-12-01 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
oooooh so erotic :)
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