ext_246998 ([identity profile] heaven-spawn.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2006-10-03 01:55 pm
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A favorite: "The First to Love" by Simeon Dumdum Jr.

The First to Love
Simeon Dumdum Jr.

Always she is a step ahead.
When I think of giving her flowers,
She waylays me with wine-red roses.
And if I get up in the morning,
Pulled out of bed by the idea
Of a long walk across the fields,
She would be there, lacing her shoes,
The coffee, which was on my mind,
Filling up the room with its presence.
But one day, when there was a downpour,
I made sure I would be the first
To suggest that we have a race
In the rain, but she turned me down,
And I saw in her smile that we
Were too old for such recklessness.
But that afternoon, the sun blazed,
And she asked what just then had crossed
My mind, that we both go outside.
The road was a patchwork of water.
I wanted to help her across
A rain puddle, forgetting that
Her legs were longer than mine.

[identity profile] flight-of-song.livejournal.com 2006-10-03 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
This makes me feel all warm and gooey inside :D