ext_23471 ([identity profile] the-grynne.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2007-07-12 04:31 pm

Anna Swir, "The Soul and the Body on the Beach"

THE SOUL AND THE BODY ON THE BEACH

The soul on the beach
studies a textbook of philosophy.
The soul asks the body:
Who bound us together?
The body says:
Time to tan the knees.

The soul asks the body:
Is it true
that we do not really exist?
The body says:
I'm tanning my knees.

The soul asks the body:
Where will the dying begin,
in you or in me?
The body laughs,
It tanned its knees.


ANNA SWIR

Translated by Czeslaw Milosz and Leonard Nathan

[identity profile] bennmorland.livejournal.com 2007-07-12 07:28 am (UTC)(link)
Whoa. This one's definitely a keeper.

[identity profile] gardenwaltz.livejournal.com 2007-07-12 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it and hope that my next comment will show my understanding of this poem, rather than sounding flippant:

This poem needs to be printed on beach towels.

Thank you,

Recently back from the beach poet.