ext_65301 ([identity profile] grammarfight.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2007-09-28 04:40 pm
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Worthless



My fingers
cling to your shoulder blades now
until fucking becomes
an urging, a way to shake you, gently. How

can I tell you I don't feel
safe, when inside
a man holds bars before his face

believing himself into a prison,
when parrots fly from his open mouth
as he tries to speak, repeating worthless,

worthless
? I'm trying to love you

but I don't know how, & then
I start to remember—we are locked together
& pushing, pushing.

—Nick Flynn

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[identity profile] aimlesswanderer.livejournal.com 2007-09-29 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I like it that poetry can excite you so.

./w

[identity profile] archethereal.livejournal.com 2007-10-02 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
It's damn-near embarrassing what excites me. I consider Nick Flynn to be of the type that pulls me from a stupor and milks me into truth.

And, thank you for this. : )