I Eat Poetry

I see what you mean about being visually evocative. I don't personally have a preference for poetry. I suppose what separates an interesting poem from an uninteresting poem is the use of the language, the use of rhythm, the mood created by these aspects, the story, and then the imagery, and then the mood created by the story and the imagery. I'm still not sure what separates poetry I love from poetry I find merely fascinating or good.

I like this line, "Time tells me what I am. I change and I am the same." Other than that, these poems aren't for me.