ext_65235 ([identity profile] aimlesswanderer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2010-08-30 07:19 pm
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My Sister, Who Died Young, Takes Up The Task -- Jon Pineda








My Sister, Who Died Young, Takes Up The Task
by Jon Pineda

A basket of apples brown in our kitchen,
their warm scent is the scent of ripening,

and my sister, entering the room quietly,
takes a seat at the table, takes up the task

of peeling slowly away the blemished skins,
even half-rotten ones are salvaged carefully.

She makes sure to carve out the mealy flesh.
For this, I am grateful. I explain, this elegy

would love to save everything
. She smiles at me,
and before long, the empty bowl she uses fills,

domed with thin slices she brushes into
the mouth of a steaming pot on the stove.

What can I do? I ask finally. Nothing,
she says, let me finish this one thing alone.

[identity profile] punkinelf.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful! So quiet yet deep

[identity profile] glaciator.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
God this is beautiful.

[identity profile] gamesiplay.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
This one breaks my heart every time. Thanks.

[identity profile] missparker.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
one of my favorites.

[identity profile] mijeli.livejournal.com 2010-08-31 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
This is very unusual, and heavy on the tongue. I had to read it twice.
yarrowkat: original art by Brian Froud (typewriter)

[personal profile] yarrowkat 2010-08-31 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my. heartbreaking. and powerful.