https://red-corals.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] red-corals.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2010-09-01 06:45 pm
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Suburban Lovers by Bruce Dawe

Every morning they hold hands
on the fleet diesel that interprets them
like music on a roller-piano as they move
over the rhythmic rails. Her thoughts lie
kitten-curled in his while the slats of living
racket past them, back-yards greying
with knowledge, embankments blazoned
with pig-face whose hardihood
be theirs, mantling with pugnacious flowers
stratas of clay, blank sandstone, sustaining them
against years' seepage, rain's intolerance.

Each evening they cross the line
while the boom-gate's slender arms constrain
the lines of waiting cars.
Stars now have flown up out of the east.
They halt at her gate. Next-door's children
scatter past, laughing. They smile. The moon,
calm as a seashore, raises its pale face.
Their hands dance in the breeze blowing
from a hundred perfumed gardens. On the cliff of kissing
they know this stillness come down upon them like a cone.
All day it has been suspended there, above their heads.

[identity profile] woodwind.livejournal.com 2010-09-01 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
So lovely!

[identity profile] riotact.livejournal.com 2010-09-01 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
This is strangely beautiful. I just keep rereading it.