ext_4537 ([identity profile] mizraim.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2004-06-12 12:57 pm

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Clenched Soul
By Pablo Neruda

We have lost even this twilight.
No one saw us this evening hand in hand
while the blue night dropped on the world.

I have seen from my window
the fiesta of sunset in the distant mountain tops.

Sometimes a piece of sun
burned like a coin in my hand.

I remembered you with my soul clenched
in that sadness of mine that you know.

Where were you then?
Who else was there?
Saying what?
Why will the whole of love come on me suddenly
when I am sad and feel you are far away?

The book fell that always closed at twilight
and my blue sweater rolled like a hurt dog at my feet.

Always, always you recede through the evenings
toward the twilight erasing statues.

[identity profile] joseishijin.livejournal.com 2004-06-12 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
With every poem posted here, I am falling more and more in love with Pablo Neruda. Lovely!

[identity profile] iamkatia.livejournal.com 2004-06-12 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)

beauteous...

[identity profile] amberleecarter.livejournal.com 2004-06-12 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Neruda is one of my favs..never get tired of reading his work...thanks for posting this.