this is the most beautiful decriptive poem i've read in a long time...by someone "published" *hehe*
i have some amazing writer friends and this piece reminds me of something a close friend would write...
what a beautiful find and share...thank you
can't get "these gardens empty; these fields only flower ghosts; these yards with faces gone" out of my head! truly romantic and powerful and sad till the bitter sweet ending "i pronounce a useless good-by"
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Date: 2004-06-14 04:00 pm (UTC)i have some amazing writer friends and this piece reminds me of something a close friend would write...
what a beautiful find and share...thank you
can't get "these gardens empty; these fields only flower ghosts; these yards with faces gone" out of my head! truly romantic and powerful and sad till the bitter sweet ending "i pronounce a useless good-by"
*soft sigh*