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Dec. 3rd, 2002 11:15 amCreative Writing
One of my students
has written a story:
It's the end of the world
and an alien spaceship
is circling the planet
trying to make contact.
Hello? Anybody down there?
But it's just as they suspect.
After the atmosphere ignites-
nothing. Not a whimper. Even
our germs are dead. Now
they'll have to start over.
What a drag! Other planets
in the galaxy are doing fine
but you and I, the human race,
we just can't get it somehow.
Perhaps reptiles might work
or something underwater…
And so it goes for fifty pages-
fifty million years in fact,
one dimwit, evolutionary dud
after another-until finally
Homo Erectus! our old friend
back again. Talk about irony!
The best minds in the universe,
eon upon eon of experiment
and here we are, right back
where we started, doomed-
perfectly ignorant, oblivious
to art, language, metaphor…
yet hearing voices nonetheless,
the genius of creation itself
mumbling at us from a cloud.
So what can we do after all
but sweat blood, struggle,
learn to write it down-
never mind the spelling
the ribbon without ink-
the lords of the universe
are circling the planet
like moths around a desk lamp
and the whole dorm is asleep.
by Michael Van Walleghen
One of my students
has written a story:
It's the end of the world
and an alien spaceship
is circling the planet
trying to make contact.
Hello? Anybody down there?
But it's just as they suspect.
After the atmosphere ignites-
nothing. Not a whimper. Even
our germs are dead. Now
they'll have to start over.
What a drag! Other planets
in the galaxy are doing fine
but you and I, the human race,
we just can't get it somehow.
Perhaps reptiles might work
or something underwater…
And so it goes for fifty pages-
fifty million years in fact,
one dimwit, evolutionary dud
after another-until finally
Homo Erectus! our old friend
back again. Talk about irony!
The best minds in the universe,
eon upon eon of experiment
and here we are, right back
where we started, doomed-
perfectly ignorant, oblivious
to art, language, metaphor…
yet hearing voices nonetheless,
the genius of creation itself
mumbling at us from a cloud.
So what can we do after all
but sweat blood, struggle,
learn to write it down-
never mind the spelling
the ribbon without ink-
the lords of the universe
are circling the planet
like moths around a desk lamp
and the whole dorm is asleep.
by Michael Van Walleghen
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Date: 2002-12-03 08:24 am (UTC)