ext_115480 ([identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] greatpoetry2005-11-14 06:51 pm
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Senryu

on uncle frank's arms
bruises where death tapped him,
asking for the time

-- Ray McNiece
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[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-16 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
It's real ominous but sort of personal, too.

[identity profile] writtenbyhand.livejournal.com 2005-11-16 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
I know. It manages to be creepy, sad, witty and damn wonderful in just three lines. Wow.

[identity profile] persephone-blue.livejournal.com 2005-11-18 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
Which is why I say, hurrah for haiku! Err, senryu.
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