[identity profile] i-hunger.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
To the Young Who Want to Die:
Gwendolyn Brooks

Sit down. Inhale. Exhale.
The gun will wait. The lake will wait.
The tall gall in the small seductive vial
will wait will wait:
will wait a week: will wait through April.
You do not have to die this certain day.
Death will abide, will pamper your postponement.
I assure you death will wait. Death has
a lot of time. Death can
attend to you tomorrow. Or next week. Death is
just down the street; is most obliging neighbor;
can meet you any moment.

You need not die today.
Stay here--through pout or pain or peskyness.
Stay here. See what the news is going to be tomorrow.

Graves grow no green that you can use.
Remember, green's your color. You are Spring.

Date: 2007-08-06 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girliebacchanal.livejournal.com
I love this, thanks.

Date: 2007-08-06 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girliebacchanal.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's by a Belgian artist called Privat-Livemont.

Date: 2007-08-06 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sliverofsanity.livejournal.com
very nice. I like the line breaks "Death has/a lot of time. Death can/..."
The end is almost trite, but isn't.
I'm keeping this one. Thanks!

Date: 2007-08-06 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] break-the-stars.livejournal.com
this made me *mentally* cry (i don't really cry.. conditioning...). a lot. an experience that hits quite close to home.
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Date: 2007-08-06 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] break-the-stars.livejournal.com
hahah no i conditioned myself to not cry. i don't cry unless something is really really really upsettingly affecting my personal life.

perhaps that's the things. i was taught it was more a weakness than a power. alas.
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Date: 2007-08-06 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] break-the-stars.livejournal.com
i write. that's how i let go. :)

surely.

Date: 2007-08-06 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iatrogenicmyth.livejournal.com
it's not that easy. it takes a lot of work.

Date: 2007-08-06 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] break-the-stars.livejournal.com
♥ you understand. :)

Date: 2007-08-06 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fatal-xtc.livejournal.com
Conditioned by yourself or someone else? Just wondering.

Date: 2007-08-06 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] break-the-stars.livejournal.com
i conditioned myself. sorta. my father had a way with attempting to raise me like a boy i think...

Date: 2007-08-06 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virginia-bell.livejournal.com
I just loved the alliteration of "graves grow no green."

Date: 2007-08-06 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardenwaltz.livejournal.com
i want to graffiti this on large walls everywhere.

Date: 2007-08-06 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aria-muse.livejournal.com
i love that this was said

Date: 2007-08-06 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fatal-xtc.livejournal.com
Very powerful poem.

Date: 2007-08-06 04:20 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-08-06 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowfax994.livejournal.com
i appreciate this poem because it doesn't ridicule or discount anyone's pain. it doesn't say everything will be okay. it just says, please, wait.

i wish i had been introduced to this poem sooner.

Date: 2007-08-06 04:27 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-08-06 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashcanprobably.livejournal.com
Fast fast fast.

Date: 2007-08-06 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-xtina.livejournal.com
I echo what an above commenter says - it doesn't lie, it just says to wait.

For no good reason, it reminds me of this comic (http://xkcd.com/167/).  (No, really.)

Date: 2007-08-06 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_18392: Bodie and Doyle from the Professionals, standing unnecessarily close together. In suits. (acceptance)
From: [identity profile] tears-of-nienna.livejournal.com
I had forgotten about that particular XKCD comic. Oddly enough, it's as comforting as the poem. :D
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Date: 2007-08-08 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowfax994.livejournal.com
off topic, but, stephen icon = ♥. :]

Date: 2007-08-06 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annainthebox.livejournal.com
this needs to be big.
written everywhere.
I might even make a bulletin board out of it...

Date: 2007-08-06 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acreofbones.livejournal.com
Fuck. Utterly perfect.

Date: 2007-08-06 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melodily.livejournal.com
I would agree with all of them up there-- this is powerful (:

Date: 2007-08-07 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heaven-spawn.livejournal.com
WOW.

(man, if I had bigger fonts, I'd use it with my "wow")

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