by e. e. cummings

[pontri.livejournal.com]

may i feel said he
(i'll squeal said she
just once said he)
it's fun said she

(may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she

(let's go said he
not too far said she
what's too far said he
where you are said she)

may i stay said he
(which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she

may i move said he
is it love said she)
if you're willing said he
(but you're killing said he

but it's life said he
but your wife said she
now said he)
ow said she

(tiptop said he
don't stop said she
oh no said he)
go slow said she

(cccome? said he
ummm said she)
you're divine! said he
(you are Mine said she)

Comments

[umpachki.livejournal.com]

Nice...

[monkeyman.livejournal.com]

you can't go wrong with Cummings!

[welikeit.livejournal.com]

ha! i read that for the first time last night! it is very good

[wildemoose.livejournal.com]

I can't read this poem without remembering my adorable 23-year-old ninth grade English teacher reading it out loud to our class. She was also the person who introduced me to sexual innuendo in Shakespeare--a wonderful woman. :)