[identity profile] failingwithease.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Grow

a tadpole doesn't know
it's gonna grow bigger
it just swims
and figures limbs
are for frogs

people don't know
the power they hold
they just sing hymns
and figure saving
is for god

Date: 2008-05-04 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talullahred.livejournal.com
Yes. Working on it.

Date: 2008-05-04 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamnotgemma.livejournal.com
LOVE this.

Date: 2008-05-04 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frozenfrenzy.livejournal.com
ah, lovely!

Date: 2008-05-04 05:02 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-05-04 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sirfeste.livejournal.com
that was surprisingly striking

Date: 2008-05-04 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meudail.livejournal.com
These are the best kinds--short, but incredibly powerful.

What an amazing poem.

Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2008-05-05 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] defyingstars.livejournal.com
That's really powerful.

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