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In the soapy water our bodies steamed
like newborns still flushed from the womb's caul.
This bath was our farewell ritual: We'd played
Hide the Soap and Tropical Rain Forest.
In the fogged mirror our forms
had merged and come untwined.
The clock ticked down to my dawn flight,
but this time a vow had been spoken,
a bond entered into, unwitnessed
by any assembly but nonetheless
sacred. The ring on my hand shone
with the firmament's starlight. Though candles around us
guttered and the water cooled and each cupped
the other's face with withered hands, our bodies
steamed, our tired souls could not stop rising.
Mary Karr; "Adieu"
Viper Rum
like newborns still flushed from the womb's caul.
This bath was our farewell ritual: We'd played
Hide the Soap and Tropical Rain Forest.
In the fogged mirror our forms
had merged and come untwined.
The clock ticked down to my dawn flight,
but this time a vow had been spoken,
a bond entered into, unwitnessed
by any assembly but nonetheless
sacred. The ring on my hand shone
with the firmament's starlight. Though candles around us
guttered and the water cooled and each cupped
the other's face with withered hands, our bodies
steamed, our tired souls could not stop rising.
Mary Karr; "Adieu"
Viper Rum
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Date: 2008-05-31 02:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-31 11:58 pm (UTC)Isn't she an author? or written memoirs?
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Date: 2008-06-01 12:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-01 12:31 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-02 09:07 pm (UTC)really, the whole collection is amazing.