Love poem

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Equations
By Summer Hess

It’s purely math-
ematical
Logic-based
Simple
All right angles
And white light.

Then we met
The light bent and
I
Prismed.

Love is change.
I am changed.

Comments

[only-more-love.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[tokio.livejournal.com]

I think this would have been more effective minus the last stanza.

[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

I agree.

[howitaddsup.livejournal.com]

oh! This is wonderful.

[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

New to me. Thanks for sharing, I like it.