[identity profile] orneryhipster.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Aren't they? The quintessential mother and teenage daughter. I love this poem, it really is like a response to the other one. Because it's like she knows. She's just waiting.

Demeter by Carol Ann Duffy

Where I lived – winter and hard earth.
I sat in my cold stone room
choosing tough words, granite, flint,

to break the ice. My broken heart –
I tried that, but it skimmed,
flat, over the frozen lake.

She came from a long, long way,
but I saw her at last, walking,
my daughter, my girl, across the fields,

in bare feet, bringing all spring’s flowers
to her mother’s house. I swear
the air softened and warmed as she moved,

the blue sky smiling, none too soon
with the small shy mouth of a new moon

March 2025

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