[identity profile] tuesdaylectures.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
i hunt death
like a black spyder
like it is a black spyder i mean
a black spyder that i hope
and pray i will not find

what im trying to say is
that i hunt truth
like it is a black spyder
seen
scurrying between a stack
of old bricks
in my fathers back yard

Date: 2008-11-21 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] everetteseven.livejournal.com
Love this. It's excellent.

Date: 2008-11-21 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pythia.livejournal.com
I liked it, but the spelling of 'spider' with a 'y' really detracted for me. Unless he was talking about hunting Lamborghinis in his back hard, which I don't think is the case. :P

Date: 2008-11-21 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pythia.livejournal.com
See, if there's a reason for it, it doesn't bother me so much. Haha.

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