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Oct. 2nd, 2009 03:40 pm
[identity profile] thetasteless.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Family Stories
by Dorianne Laux


I had a boyfriend who told me stories about his family,
how an argument once ended when his father
seized a lit birthday cake in both hands
and hurled it out a second-story window. That,
I thought, was what a normal family was like: anger
sent out across the sill, landing like a gift
to decorate the sidewalk below. In mine
it was fists and direct hits to the solar plexus,
and nobody ever forgave anyone. But I believed
the people in his stories really loved one another,
even when they yelled and shoved their feet
through cabinet doors or held a chair like a bottle
of cheap champagne, christening the wall,
rungs exploding from their holes.
I said it sounded harmless, the pomp and fury
of the passionate. He said it was a curse
being born Italian and Catholic and when he
looked from that window what he saw was the moment
rudely crushed. But all I could see was a gorgeous
three-layer cake gliding like a battered ship
down the sidewalk, the smoking candles broken, sunk
deep in the icing, a few still burning.

Date: 2009-10-02 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueveinwrists.livejournal.com
I love everything I've read by her. This is so sad, thanks for posting.

Date: 2009-10-02 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zarahemla.livejournal.com
I love this.

Date: 2009-10-02 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] harktislark.livejournal.com
Beautiful.

Date: 2009-10-07 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suspensionpoint.livejournal.com
<3 I love this so much.

But being Italian and Catholic, I can understand the boyfriend's point of view too xD

Date: 2012-02-05 01:20 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] with-rainfall.livejournal.com
Oh, man, thank you for this. I was looking for a poem about anger and this is perfect.

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