Faiz Ahmed Faiz, 'We Who Were Executed'

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

We Who Were Executed

(After reading the letters of Julius and Ethel Rosenberg)

I longed for your lips, dreamed of their roses:
I was hanged from the dry branch of the scaffold.
I wanted to touch your hands, their silver light:
I was murdered in the half-light of dim lanes.

And there where you were crucified,
so far away from my words,
you still were beautiful:
color kept clinging to your lips –
rapture was still vivid in your hair –
light remained silvering in your hands.

When the night of cruelty merged with the roads you had taken,
I came as far as my feet could bring me,
on my lips the phrase of a song,
my heart lit up only by sorrow.
This sorrow was my testimony to your beauty –
Look! I remained a witness till the end,
I who was killed in the darkest lanes.

It’s true – that not to reach you was fate –
but who’ll deny that to love you
was entirely in my hands?
So why complain if these matters of desire
brought me inevitably to the execution grounds?

Why complain? Holding up our sorrows as banners,
new lovers will emerge
from the lanes where we were killed
and embark, in caravans, on those highways of desire.
It’s because of them that we shortened the distances of sorrow,
it’s because of them that we went out to make the world our own,
we who were murdered in the darkest lanes.

(translated from the Urdu by Agha Shahid Ali)

Comments

[bohemiabythesea.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is amazing.

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

Isn't it?? And Shahid's translations are always spot-on, too.

[bohemiabythesea.livejournal.com]

Yes, it does not sound translated at all, very lyrical.

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

I know! He seems to translate the meaning rather than the words (if I'm saying that right).

[bohemiabythesea.livejournal.com]

Right, I'm going to friend you now, because obviously, we relate via poetry at least, which I'm sometimes - not always - talking about. And there might be more literature overlap. And one can always use more friends.

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

Mindreader. I was going to suggest the very same. *g* I'm afraid my journal's more fangirly than anything else, but you're most welcome!

[bohemiabythesea.livejournal.com]

I don't mind that at all. I'm happy reading it, I'm just not v active in the fangirl-department. Might be subject to change; who knows.

And hello new friend!

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

Heh. I'm not fangirly about too many things. I'm kind of predictable that way. *g*

[bohemiabythesea.livejournal.com]

Yes, I saw that! Intriguing ;)

[iatrogenicmyth.livejournal.com]

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[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

Ditto. :-)

[babbss.livejournal.com]

My gosh, this is so beautiful.

[smithkingsley.livejournal.com]

I love Faiz! Glad you liked. :-)