The Watch

Mar. 30th, 2010 11:30 pm
[identity profile] cozzybob.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
When I
took my
watch to the watchfixer I
felt privileged but also painted to watch the operation. He
had long fingernails and a voluntary squint. He
fixed a magnifying cup over his
squint eye. He
undressed my
watch. I
watched him
split her
in three layers and lay her
middle--a quivering viscera--in a circle on a little plinth. He
shoved shirtsleeves up and leaned like an ogre over my
naked watch. With critical pincers he
poked and stirred. He
lifted out little private things with a magnet too tiny for me
to watch almost. "Watch out!" I
almost said. His
eye watched, enlarged, the secrets of my watch, and I
watched anxiously. Because what if he
touched her
ticker too rough, and she
gave up the ghost out of pure fright? Or put her
things back backwards so she'd
run backwards after this? Or he
might lose a minuscule part, connected to her
exquisite heart, and mix her
up, instead of fix her.
And all the time,
all the time--
pieces on the walls, on the shelves, told the time,
told the time
in swishes and ticks,
swishes and ticks,
and seemed to be gloating, as they watched and told. I
felt faint, I
was about to lose my
breath--my
ticker was going lickety-spit--when watchfixer clipped her
three slices together with a gleam and two flicks of his
tools like chopsticks. He
spat out his
eye, lifted her
high, gave her
a twist, set her
hands right, and laid her
little face, quite as usual, in its place on my
wrist.


--May Swenson

Date: 2010-03-31 10:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaski.livejournal.com
Oh wow, that's really lovely - and surprisingly visceral.

Date: 2010-04-01 12:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ryntha-doghare.livejournal.com
Wow. Love it!

Date: 2010-04-02 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gh0stmeat.livejournal.com
clever clever may swenson!

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