[identity profile] moireach.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
A Poet’s Poem
Brenda Shaughnessy

If it takes me all day,
I will get the word freshened out of this poem.

I put it in the first line, then moved it to the second,
and now it won’t come out.

It’s stuck. I’m so frustrated,
so I went out to my little porch all covered in snow

and watched the icicles drip, as I smoked
a cigarette.

Finally I reached up and broke a big, clear spike
off the roof with my bare hand.

And used it to write a word in the snow.
I wrote the word snow.

I can’t stand myself.

Date: 2010-04-06 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zagzagael.livejournal.com
Is your icon of your own making? If so, is it borrow-able? I adore it beyond the beyonds!

Date: 2010-04-06 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zagzagael.livejournal.com
Can't thank you enough - I've been in need of a good Eliot icon.

Date: 2010-04-06 04:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mosca.livejournal.com
Fantastic.

I think this poem is about my dissertation, actually.

Date: 2010-04-06 07:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] fullofsparks.livejournal.com
My thoughts exactly!

Date: 2010-04-06 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fitofpique.livejournal.com
HEEE. This is so great!

Date: 2010-04-09 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anotherhand.livejournal.com
♥ This is brilliant. :)

Date: 2010-04-12 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bitsofbeauty.livejournal.com
this is perfect!

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