11:11 by geoffrey nutter

[roadlines.livejournal.com]

Look- the moon is a perfect circle.
A circle itself is perfect.
Please don't go behind the buildings yet again.
I have watched you all evening.
I have compared my life to yours and found mine lacking.
You are leaving me.
And you will never even know what it was.
To see a sliver of your brilliance as you finally disappeared.
I have touched the part of you that never felt me.
I have touched you all the way to untouchability.

Comments

[aulait.livejournal.com]

I can't decide if I love or hate the last line. This goes in my memories nonetheless.

[elvenpiratelady.livejournal.com]

I love poems about the moon.

[iatrogenicmyth.livejournal.com]

FUCK him. Fucking fuck of a human being.

(Not you - not the poet - but the subject who did this to the poet, to me, the one inspired such desperate emotions within.)