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Consolation for Tamar

(on the occasion of her breaking an ancient pot)
by A.E. Stallings

You know I am no archeologist, Tamar,
And that to me it is all one dust or another.
Still, it must mean something to survive the weather
Of the Ages-earthquake, flood, and war-

Only to shatter in your very hands.
Perhaps it was gravity, or maybe fated-
Although I wonder if it had not waited
Those years in drawers, aeons in distant lands,

And in your fingers' music, just a little
Was emboldened by your blood, and so forgot
That it was not a rosebud, but a pot,
And, trying to unfold for you, was brittle

Date: 2010-08-18 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eranim.livejournal.com
That's really precious.

Date: 2010-08-18 05:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rymenhild.livejournal.com
Oh, I like this one very much indeed.

Date: 2010-08-18 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary-br.livejournal.com
So sweet <3

Date: 2010-08-20 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coqdorysme.livejournal.com
Fantastic view of things :)

Date: 2010-08-27 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] o-glorianna.livejournal.com
Huh. I quite like this.

Date: 2011-08-16 07:31 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] with-rainfall.livejournal.com
and so forgot
That it was not a rosebud, but a pot,
And, trying to unfold for you, was brittle


I love the last verse, but especially those lines. :D

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