[identity profile] cymraeg.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
My first post here, and a poem I love because I don't think I could achieve its generosity:

it may not always be so; and i say
that if your lips,which i have loved, should touch
another's, and your dear strong fingers clutch
his heart, as mine in time not far away;
if on another's face your sweet hair lay
in such a silence as i know, or such
great writhing words as, uttering overmuch,
stand helplessly before the spirit at bay;

 

if this should be, i say if this should be--
you of my heart, send me a little word;
that i may go unto him, and take his hands,
saying, Accept all happiness from me.
Then shall i turn my face, and hear one bird
sing terribly afar in the lost lands.

Date: 2010-11-07 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amour-solaire.livejournal.com
great poem. sad.

Date: 2010-11-07 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teithiwr.livejournal.com
Oh, this is one of my favourite cummings poems. <3

Date: 2010-11-07 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anon-j-anon.livejournal.com
Bjork put it to song in her Sonnets/Unrealities XI--maybe you've already heard it? If not, you can watch it here on youtube. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2pyFnGFpO8) Thanks for posting the poem.

Date: 2010-11-07 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillsparkling.livejournal.com
I was going to point out the same. :-)

Date: 2010-11-08 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jesuslovesbono.livejournal.com
i noticed that...and i didn't know before now that that was an e.e. cummings poem! awesome

Date: 2010-11-08 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiden-heart.livejournal.com
thanks for this. i love it

Date: 2010-11-10 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wallyflower.livejournal.com
Years later and I still know this poem by heart. Very simple and beautiful! For some reason, among E. E. Cumming's poetry (I'm still conflicted as to whether I should write "e. e. cummings"), I'm a fan of the more structured poems.

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