[identity profile] novapsyche.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Six Apologies, Lord

I Have Loved My Horrible Self, Lord.
I Rose, Lord, and I Rose, Lord, And I
Dropt. Your Requirements, Lord. 'Spite Your Requirements, Lord,
I Have Loved The Low Voltage Of The Moon, Lord,
Until There Was No Moon Intensity Left, Lord, No Moon Intensity Left
For You, Lord. I Have Loved The Frivolous, The Fleeting, The Frightful
Clouds. Lord, I Have Loved Clouds! Do Not Forgive Me, Do Not
Forgive Me LordandLover, HarborandMaster, GuardianandBread, Do Not.
Hold Me, Lord, O, Hold Me

Accountable, Lord. I Am
Accountable, Lord.

Lord It Over Me,
Lord It Over Me, Lord. Feed Me

Hope, Lord. Feed Me
Hope, Lord, Or Break My Teeth.

Break My Teeth, Sir,

In This My Mouth.

Date: 2011-01-12 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilstorm.livejournal.com
...A poem from a sub to a dom?

Date: 2011-01-12 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thenetwork.livejournal.com
A poem to God, methinks.

Date: 2011-01-13 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilstorm.livejournal.com
That I figured, but it sounds incredibly dom/sub as well.

Date: 2011-01-13 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thenetwork.livejournal.com
It does. And it's very sexy. Sufi mysticism on crystal. I love it. :)

Date: 2011-01-14 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evilstorm.livejournal.com
LOL. I like traditional Sufi better, but this is an interesting take.

Date: 2011-01-24 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] windowwasher88.livejournal.com
I agree. This is insanely sexual.

Date: 2011-01-12 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gamesiplay.livejournal.com
Wow. Thank you for this.

Date: 2011-01-12 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coqdorysme.livejournal.com
wow the low voltage of the moon is a super good phrase!

Date: 2011-01-13 02:37 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thenetwork.livejournal.com
How beautiful. Thank you.

Date: 2011-01-13 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eranim.livejournal.com
Reminds me of Donne's holy sonnet 14. More desperate poems to God please!

Feed Me
Hope, Lord, Or Break My Teeth.

Break My Teeth, Sir,

In This My Mouth.


Wonderful.

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