[identity profile] wanton-wonton.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
225 days under grass
and you know more than I.
they have long taken your blood,
you are a dry stick in a basket.
is this how it works?
in this room
the hours of love
still make shadows.

when you left
you took almost
everything.
I kneel in the nights
before tigers
that will not let me be.

what you were
will not happen again.
the tigers have found me
and I do not care.

Date: 2011-02-19 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zagzagael.livejournal.com
When I am not around Buk I forget how very very very much I love him. Odd that. Thank you.

Date: 2011-02-19 10:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tree
i am not very fond of bukowski, but this is just lovely. it reminds me a little of borges' the other tiger.

Date: 2011-02-19 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonglows.livejournal.com
I love this poem. When my boyfriend died, I read this over and over again and it made me feel better.

Date: 2011-02-20 02:51 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-02-20 10:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skonen-blades.livejournal.com
Wow. I, too, don't have a huge fondness for Bukowski but jesus, this one cuts deep in such a short amount of time. Amazing. Hugely painful but in a good way.

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